ugh
so i have just read my prof's comments on my draft and realized that i am turning in about exactly what he did not want. b/c it was crap the first time around and i'm not changing it. for example, about 4/5 of my paper is the crap he told me i should get rid of, and approximately 1/2 of that is something that i just realized is pretty much irrelevant b/c it isn't part of the new law, but i'm going to talk about it anyways b/c I DON'T THINK THAT CHILD PORN MAKES PEOPLE MOLEST CHILDREN. and since that's all i've got, that's what i'm going to say. not very clearly, not very coherently, but with a lot of footnotes, and a lot of wordy phrases that clutter up the page!
but based on the IM conversations i keep having with my classmates, it's my sincere hope that their papers really are as bad as they say, and we're all just lowering the bar for a B+.
but based on the IM conversations i keep having with my classmates, it's my sincere hope that their papers really are as bad as they say, and we're all just lowering the bar for a B+.
posted by laura at 3:17 PM
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I know your classmates and believe me, their papers are pretty freakin' bad.
If this is a sample of your writing skill I think you need to go back to elementary.
The idea that Child Porn does not lead to molesting children? Dear that is exactly what happened to make the porn to begin with. So your point is moronic.
Try understanding what your writing about. Then consider writing at college level.
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